PEER-EDITING FOR DRAFT

TUESDAY, 5/03/2013


Assalamualaikum readers.  Today we have to bring our laptop again because we have to check our friends’ draft. If yesterday, we done with self-editing and today we continue with per editing. Since, there are only two group did problem-solution essay, my group and Faiz’s group so, we just change between us not like others group they need to change with different group. After we done it, Miss Zu asks us to evaluate peer’s draft. We need to give them mark according to the criteria that have been given on the paper that Miss Zu just gave us. Give a mark??? Wuhuuuuu…Exciting! We have to give them mark but we can’t show it to them. PRIVATE AND CONFIDENTIAL! Like what Miss Zu said….Hahahahah I think Wawa and I have consider enough in giving Faiz and Salihin mark for their draft. How about you guys Faiz and Salihin??? Emmmm…curious. See you guys on the next entry. Wassalam.  

SELF EDITING....

MONDAY, 5/03/2013

TODAY MY CLASS AT USUAL  AT DSP AT 2 O’CLOCK. FIRST  ACTIVITY FOR TODAY’S CLASS IS CONTINUE FORUM FOR THE LAST GROUP SINCE THEY STILL NOT DONE YET. UNFORTUNATELY, THEY JUST ONLY HAVE THREE PANEL WHICH ARE NADIA SALIHIN, SARRA AND FAIZ OTHMAN. SYAFIKAH AZMI SHOULD BE IN THIS GROUP BUT SHE DID NOT COME BECAUSE SHE HAVING PERIOD PAIN ACCORDING TO SARRA. EMMM....PITY HER. BUT THEY STILL CONTINUE IT. THE GROUP TALK ABOUT PLASTIC BAG. THEIR FORUM GOING SMOOTHLY . GOOD JOB GUYS! THEN, MISS ZU GIVE US A PAPER AND THE COLOUR OF THE PAPER BASED ON THE TYPE OF ESSAY. FOR MY GROUP WE GOT BLUE COLOUR.  ACCORDING TO MISS ZU THE BLUE PAPER THAT WE GET IS FOR WE TO EVALUATE  OTHERS GROUPS DRAFT. THE PAPER CONSIST OF TWO SHEET WHICH ARE SELF-EDITING AND PEER EDITING. FOR TODAY CASS WE ONLY DO THE SELF EDITING. AND THE SAME TIME WE STILL EDITING OUR REFERENCES BECAUSE WE NEED TO INDENT IT. BUT SOMETHING HAPPEN I COULD NOT INTEND IT, WHEN I TRY TO DO IT, IT COMES TO FAR FROM THE EXACTLY SPACE... HOW COME?? WE END CLASS A BIT EARLY THAN USUAL. BYE GUYS! GONNA FIND SOME FOOD FOR DINNER...

LAST GROUP PRESENTING THEIR FORUM :)

THE DAY GUYS!

WEDNESDAY, 27/02/2013

      Today is the day. FORUM!  Assalamualaikum readers.  As soon as we enter the class, Miss Zu the first group which is my group. Before we start it, Miss Zu asks us to write the title for the show like a real forum that we always watch it on the television.  Izani has to decide what kind of show that wants to do it since she is the host. Then, we end it with show title “Talk show with Izani Z”. Hahahahah… It a little funny actually for me but I don’t know why. Hahahahahahahah…

      In this forum, we have to create a character every panel. Like for me my character is Prof. Nina from UNISEL. Our first panel in my group is Faiz Adha. Honestly, he was the funnier guy in my class for this semester. The way he talks just like a real American and like a rapper. You wanna be a rapper Faiz??? Hhahahahaha. He really did a good job for his part.  Our second panel is Diba. Diba a little bit nervous I think so do I. Next panel is Bella and I am the last panel for my group. I talk about the solution. I talk every single point that I got and because of nervous I can’t face my classmates so, I just read my point. Emm kind of disappoint with it but I really can’t look at them at the moment.  My group going very smoothly. WELL DONE GUYS!
         Next group is Eika’s group “Eika talk show”. This group is having interesting inputs for their topic. NICE JOB GUYS!  Third group would be Fikri’s group. You guys wanna know what? As a host, he is the funnier host. Hahahha. He makes everyone laugh with his attitude. I also can’t stand with it. Fourth group is Athira’s group. This group talks about teenage eating disorders. This topic was one of my favorite topics for today forum. Hheheheheh… Athira’s group was the last group doing the forum for today although we still have one more group but the time just being jealous towards us. What should I say then?. Best host is Fikri, best panel is Faiz adha and best group is, I think it fair. Take a look what we got the end of this today class below.  BYE! Click...click...click

  

DISCUSSING FORUM'S POINT

TUESDAY, 26/02/2013

HALUUU…Today is Tuesday. When Miss Zu come in and after recite the ‘doa’ Miss Zu said quiet for a long time she did not listen we speak in front of class. Erkkkk... What is the meaning behind that??? Means she wants to make something that we have to speak to students in this class. UH-OH…Then, Miss Zu decides to do FORUM. WHAT!  That’s not simple as what you guys think. Before that, Miss Zu teaches us about how to make references for the mid- term and final exam essay. Miss Zu teaches us one by one. In addition, Miss Zu said we need to put the references in our draft essay.

Forum start. We are dividing into 5 groups and I am in the first group. My members would be Izani, Bella, Diba and Faiz Adha. Yeahhhhh. All of them are just great members. Our task for forum would be “The cost of things has sky-rocketed over the last five years. Managing our finances is become more and more difficult. Discuss the reasons for the price increase and suggest some solutions to these problems”.   Miss Zu gives us time to thinks what the answers for the task but when the clock about to 6 p.m Miss Zu asks us whether is it okay for us to do the real forum on the next class. It’s obviously okay for us miss. The class dismisses. What’s gonna happen on next class???

COMMENTING DRAFT AND REPLACEMENT CLASS

MONDAY, 25/02/2013

Assalamualaikum readers. Today my class at DSP. Today we have to bring our laptop to the class because Miss Zu wants to check our first draft essay. We also have to comment others group essay.  My group has to change with Salihin’s group since both of us doing the same type of essay.  Salihin’s group did many comments to my group’s essay. Both of them, Salihin and Faiz gave positive comments like “your point is great”. Thanks guys. We also did a lot of commenting on their draft especially on spelling. What I hope is what I’m commenting on it is right. Hehehhehee…

 All day we just do that in class for today. At the same time, we get back our outline paper that one we submit to Miss Zu. We got 4.5 over 5. Yeahhhhhhh!!!! We make mistakes especially on sentence structure. Emmmm.  Some of the group gets a message from Miss Zu on that paper. Something likes “See me”. I don’t know. I glad that not on my group’s paper. Fuhhhh… We dismiss at 4 o’clock. BUT we have replacement class on night. See you guys tonight!

At night.

Our class for tonight supposes to be start on sharp 8 o’clock but my friend and I was late! OMG! How come? Tonight task is in a group. If before this, we done with cause and effect essay, for tonight we do problem and solution essay. Members of my group are me, Izani, Pika, Zu and Ita. Out title for this essay is about TEENAGERS VANDALISM.  Once again, we have to be a critical thinker. For this time essay, Miss Zu asks us to put the text citation. Miss Zu said one paragraph with one citation is just great. My part is introduction. It a little easier compare to before this. Hehehhehee…. With the help of MR. GOOGLE, I found the text citation that suitable for my introduction. We end this class at 10 o’clock. Bye guys!  

Make a Cause and Effect essay

WEDNESDAY, 20/02/2013

Assalamualaikum readers, today my class as usual at computer lab. I thought today Miss Zu wants to check our blog as she said before that but she does not check it. Today Miss Zu teaches us about cause and effect essay. Then, we are dividing into 5 groups since for cause and effect essay have 5 different patterns. I am in the group 3 and for my group we have to do pattern number 3. My group members are I, Salihin, Ejat, Faiz Adha, Fikri and Wawa. Based on the video that Miss Zu shows on the screen, we have to create the title and make an essay. One member would be one paragraph. My group, the video is very funny but it has its own message.  Therefore, we have to think what is the message behind the story in the video. My group’s essay title based on video is The causes of poor English pronunciation.  We a little bit in rush doing the essay so, the idea just a little bit messy at that time. For my part, I am making one of the causes. At the same time, we are allowed to search the information on Google since we are in the computer lab.  At 6 o’clock, we have to submit it for Miss Zu to check it. Before we dismiss the class, Miss Zu already writes the homework for us to do this weekend. I am considering it as much. Well, bye guys. See you later. Have a great weekend everyone. May Allah bless all the readers.

inferences & prediction

MONDAY, 18/02/2013

HAPPY CHINESE  NEW  YEAR! FOR THOSE WHO IS CHINESE……ASSALAMULAIKUM, TODAY OUR CLASS AT DSP AT 2 O’CLOCK. TODAY WE LEARN ABOUT MAKING INFERENCES AND PREDICTIONS WHEN READING. WHAT IS INFERENCES? DID YOU GUYS KNOW WHAT THE MEANING IS? INFERENCES IS WHAT YOU READ BETWEEN THE LINES OR THE AUTHOR WANT YOU, AS A READER TO GUESS WHAT ACTUALLY HE OR SHE MEAN.  AND WHAT ABOUT PREDICTION? WHAT IS THE MEANING OF PREDICTION? PREDICTION IS PROCESS OR ACT OF FORETELLING FUTURE EVENTS, CONDITIONS, OUTCOMES OR TRENDS ON THE OF CURRENT INFORMATION. DID YOU GUYS KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU READ? EMMM…. LET ME TELL YOU. WHILE YOU READ, YOUR UNSIDE VOICE WILL MAKE GUESS, FINDS CONNECTING POINTS, ASKS QUESTIONS, MAKES PREDICTIONS, PERSONALIZES THE READING AND USES BACKGROUND  KNOWLEDGE TO INTERPRET. ARE THOSE THINGS HAVING HAPPEN TO YOU? TO ME? YES…. ESPECIALLY MAKES PREDICTIONS. WE ALSO PLAY A GAME CALL “THE GAME OF CLUE” THE GAME OF CLUE IS AN INFERECES GAME.  IN THIS GAME, WE HAVE TO GUESS WHO KILL MR.  BOBBY, WHERE HE HAS BEEN KILLING AND WHAT WEAPON IS USE TO KILL HIM. ALL OF US SEARCH FOR THE CLUE AND AT LAST, WASIM GET THE ANSWER. GOOD JOB WASIM! UNTIL HERE GUYS! SEE YOU ON THE NEXT ENTRY. BY THE WAY, I HAVE NO BEL 311 FOR TOMORROW. BYE!